A first draft treatment.

Scrip/Walkthrough for Nurse Boy

Scene: The class room – the weather outside is nice and sunny – it is later afternoon.

The shot opens with a wide shot of the class room with students sitting there studying as all good students do. There is nothing out of the ordinary looking about this class room.

Student one: “Cough”

Hearing one of the students cough the rest of the students in the class room look at him in alarm, they look like the end of the world is coming.

The students begin to look around – as if they are waiting for something.

(Idea – maybe the weather changes and it becomes a thunder storm outside)

The shot changes to the windows which face into the hall of the school building. There is a figure that is moving along the hall way.

Just then the door is kicked in and there standing there is the not quite right school nurse.

The students in the room start to freak out and start running around the room.

The school nurse walks briskly up to student one.

School nurse: “Someone needs some healing” (or something corny like that)

He pins student one to the wall and beings ‘Healing’ the rest of the class.

(This part of the scrip needs a lot work and I know this)

Ideas so far:

• He throws smaller needles into the face of other students- they fall to the ground screaming in pain.
• Students that try to get out of the window – he throws banges at them and makes raps them like a mummy.
• The nurse pores pills into a students throat and they froth at the mouth.
• Uses big band-aid and cover the students mouth so that they can’t breath.

Ending one

The school nurse walks back to student one and takes the big needle from the wall and student one falls, when he student one gets back up the school nurse stabs him with his giant needle and pumps him full of the stang liquid.

Student one fills up with the liquid and more or less pops, sending parts of himself around the class room.

The school nurse stands there with a proud look on his face.

School Nurse: “All is right with the world” (or another corny line)

The school nurse walks out of the scene.

There are students lying around the class room half dead, and just then one of them moves a little trying to get up.

Just as the student does this a small needle comes flying across the scene and hits that student on the head – the student falls back down to the ground.

End

Ending two

The school nurse walks back to student one and takes the big needle from the wall and student one falls, when he student one gets back up the school nurse turns around and stabs another student with his giant needle and pumps him full of the stang liquid.

This student pop and is scatted across the room.

(I need to figure out how the nurse leaves the room)

Student one is left standing there, with a puzzled look on his face.

Student one: “Cough”

End

First draft synopsis: (is taken from a back post)

The main character is a high school nurse who is a little bit over-the-top when it comes to helping people. This makes the students of the school very nervous about being ill, or becoming sick. This will be a short 2D animated film. The story will start off with a classroom full of students quietly working, when one of them coughs just a little. All heads turn to that student with expressions of panic and horror on their faces. The door is suddenly thrown open and standing there is the school nurse with a big needle in his hands (and lots of other first aid paraphernalia on him). He walks up the student who has just coughed and says a really corny line like, “Someone needs to be healed”. He starts throwing needles around and pills everywhere as he tries to treat all the students in the class room. While this is happening, all the students are freaking out, trying to get away. But in the end all the students are all over the room, either with needles sticking out of them or with foam coming out of their mouths (from being given too many pills), while the school nurse has a very happy look on his face – the expression of someone who has done the right thing well. The film concludes with another corny line, such as, “All’s right with the world”, as the nurse walks out of the room, with everyone in it not looking all that healthy.